Audio Draft

For my story I really wanted to be able to tell my message within the given time frame. I could have gone on and on, but I think the time limit actually helped me keep my story nice and short. Being able to drive home an important message within 2 minutes is a challenge, but since the message itself wasn’t complex it was rather easy. For my design process I was able to ask one of the local highschool football coaches a question about what he sees on a daily basis regarding his athletes. This was the best part of my story because I was able to use someone who sees it happen to kids every year and knows the full extent of my story. I used google docs to write down my script as to what I was going to say during my story. Finding the right parts of the story to tell was difficult because I had to keep it short in order to meet the time requirements. I keep my history in sports short because I felt it wasn’t too important to what the overall theme of the story was. It took me 6-7 takes to record the story without errors. I didn’t think I would get nervous talking into a microphone to nobody, but I struggled with pronouncing my words and my pace. For the first few takes my voice was shaky and I had cottonmouth. After awhile my nerves calmed down and I recorded a draft without errors. What I like about audition over other programs is that you can easily edit the length of the audio with the sliding tool. With other programs such as audacity I struggled with the interface and ended up just getting frustrated. I really enjoyed doing this part of the project as I was able to make sense of all the images I made with photoshop and illustrator.

2 thoughts on “Audio Draft

  1. Hi Ryan,

    Your story was very well done. Your voice has a great pitch and it’s easy to understand. I also had a hard time recoding myself and had to redo it a lot of times. I like how easy it is to edit the length of the audio on illustrator. I would recommend adding a background sound to make your story livelier and more personalized. Consider using a soundtrack or a sound that relates to your topic, but make sure it is not overpowering your voice. Overall your message was well received, and I liked how you incorporated your coach this really made your message more personalized.

    -Brenda

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  2. I think it’s a great idea to talk about your own perspective, and how your academics effected your athletics. I’ve seen a lot out there in the media about academics and athletics, but it’s often from teachers and counselors, not from the perspective of athletes themselves on the importance of athletics. The one thing that really stood out to me is the positioning of the audio clip from the coach. Personally, I think it would work as a good hook into the story, since the coach or counselor perspective is more familiar, and your story would support what the coach is saying. It could also work as a conclusion though, or where it is, it just stuck out more to me than anything else. Other than that, I think it’s good, maybe some sort of volume balancing between your voice levels and the coach’s voice levels, but that could just be me.

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